Revisions 3

A final change I plan on doing is having more variety in my photographs. On my article, I have only pictures of the inside of the malls and how vacant it is which lacks variety. On my revision post added an image of the outside of one of the main malls that is closing down to make the article pop more. I think the new image's warmth is a much better fit and is more colorful for the reader. On the left below is before, and the right is after I made the change.

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